"Have you ever been in love?"- Read my short story! Feedback?

Seriously, you are a naturally born writer. I think you should definitley write a novel. First, base it on an idea:Maybe a life lesson, or a problem the world has. Add some deep, dark secrets, some love, drama, and sadness, and your book will be a hit. I loved it. Great job! And please take my advice, don't waste your talent. Try to make your book something that will change the way people look at life.